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October 31st, 2002, 01:25 PM
November 1st, 2002, 05:38 AM
Not a bad composition. Suggestion, the green should be reflected on the hulls of the ships. It would add so much to the picture.
November 1st, 2002, 05:47 AM
What he said.
November 10th, 2002, 10:34 PM
I like the green background. For the ships, the starfleet pennant is missing the registries and is upside down on the lead ship. Perhaps the pennant tapers too much as well.
The composition seems a bit off to me. I think this picture lacks a focus, since the lead ship is cut off and the other ships are rather small.
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