Ghostrider114
March 6th, 2007, 09:22 PM
I was just wondering what some of you people might think about a little series I am working on, this is my latest:
Star Trek New Order
Episode 009
“Fire and Ice”
Captain’s Log; Star Date 57049.5; we left space dock several hours ago and before rejoining the fleet, I have decided to put the ship through a quick shake down. Our CAG has asked me to come down to the main shuttlebay to see something she picked up at Star Base 11.
Captain Hunt walked into the hanger deck and saw a short blond woman in a green jumpsuit briskly polishing the wing root of a large gray fighter. Hunt snuck up behind her. “I thought we left the Idiot at the Star Base for one of Brin’s goons to pick up?”
She turned around, startled, “I did; impound bay, as you instructed,” Chavin answered, “This is what I wanted to show you.”
“It looks like a Peregrine Fighter,” Hunt answered, “just like the dozen others onboard.”
“Wrong,” Chavin replied, “this is a Peregrine III.”
“What’s the difference?”
“Peregrine Is, like T’kir’s boat, were originally built as Couriers and EW craft, meant to be escorted by the armed Sparrow IIs.” Chavin explained, “a few were bought by the Maquis and modified with phasers; that became the basis for the Mark II, which Starfleet also gave a smaller, one man, cockpit and larger magazine. Now this baby is a Mark III, brand new and designed as a fighter bomber from the start. I volunteered to test her out for a friend in Fighter Command.”
“Ok,” Hunt nodded, “Why didn’t you talk to me about it?”
“I wanted to surprise you,” she answered as she produced a pair of pressure suits from the open cockpit.”
“Well,” Hunt responded, “I am thoroughly surprised.”
“I wanted to take you out for the first test flight.”
* * *
Within minutes, Hunt was seated in the back seat of the tandem cockpit putting his helmet on. Chavin keyed her helmet’s communicator, “The air boss has cleared us for taxi,” she said to Hunt as the GravLifts kicked in and lifted the fighter’s landing struts a nanometer off the deck so that Chavin could taxi the wheel-less fighter to the shuttlecraft elevator. Then they rode the elevator to the main shuttlebay, two decks above. Once they entered the main shuttlebay, Chavin deftly brought the craft to one of the four massive gravity catapults built into the deck plating, and disengaged the GravLifts. A yellow shirted Deck Hand exchanged hand signals with Chavin through the canopy as Hunt felt the gravity catapult lift the fighter back up several centimeters as Chavin raised the landing struts into their flight positions.
“Asgard, this is Thor One-Zero-Zero,” Chavin addressed the Traffic Controller, “requesting takeoff clearance shuttle bay one, cat two.”
“You came up with those call signs, didn’t you?” Hunt asked, knowing her affinity for a certain Science Fiction program.
“No,” She answered, “Hello: Beliskner, ‘Thor’s Chariot,’ from ‘Asgard,’ the home of the Norse gods, they kind of came with it.” Hunt nodded.
Then the Controller returned, “Asgard to Thor One-Zero-Zero, you are cleared to launch on cat two, Supreme Commander.” Hunt chuckled.
“Ok that one I did come up with,” Chavin relented, after an awkward silence, “Come on, Supreme Commander Thor.” As the gravity catapult powered up, the two of them ran through a last minute checklist.
Hunt looked down at his stick and throttle assembly and asked. “Why does this thing have a stick?”
“Have you ever tried to do combat maneuvers in one of these things from the LCARS terminal?” She shot back, “I made sure that they put that in so it is easier to control.” Then they began to feel weightless as the gravity catapult came to full power. The catapult was designed to assist the heavy fighter in safely launching from the relatively short shuttle bay. Chavin then gave the yellow shirted crewman a thumb up gesture with her hand, and he retreated to the catapult control panel. She then saluted him and he activated the Catapult.
Hunt abruptly felt eight Gs of force pressing him into his seat as the fighter accelerated forwards. Then all of a sudden, the gravity tractor reversed polarity and the fighter slammed into the deck; then the craft shot backwards with eight times the force of normal earth gravity. As it slammed into the back wall of the shuttlebay, the main deuterium tank ruptured and began spilling the heavy hydrogen slush onto the deck. Then the still running Impulse engines’ hot exhaust ignited the volatile fuel and started a massive conflagration around the stricken craft.
Fire Crews were already responding when Hunt came out of his G induced black out. He reached forward and shook Chavin awake. Around them, Hunt could only see a wall of bright blue fire. Acknowledging that the two of them were in a vessel potentially filled with explosives and other highly unstable items, Hunt and Chavin began to safe everything.
“I’m scramming the Warp Core,” Chavin announced, pressing a control on her panel, “We had better do something about the ordinance.” Praying that the nose was still pointed towards the open shuttle bay doors, and that no one was in the way, Hunt rapid fired all four of the loaded micro torpedoes out of the forward torpedo banks, and into space behind the ship.
“What should I do about the antimatter,” Hunt asked.
“Hope that the magnetic containment holds,” Chavin shrugged, “the hatch is on the belly.”
“Let’s get the hell out of here!” Chavin said as she pressed the canopy release; nothing happened. She tried again, but still nothing.
“I wouldn’t want to step out into that anyway,” Hunt deadpanned, pointing outside at the still growing inferno.
“Frak!” Chavin exclaimed, pounding her fist on the canopy, “the emergency transporters won’t work either.”
“Come to think of it,” Hunt thought aloud, “why hasn’t Beliskner beamed us out yet?”
“Frak this,” Chavin shouted again, as she reached for the Ejection handle on her seat.
“Wait,” Hunt yelled, “if you try that in here, we will go splat against the roof!” Then Hunt had an idea, he quickly scanned the ceiling, looking for the explosive bolts that held the emergency hatches onto the ship. He explained his plan to Chavin.
“What about the crew in here?” Chavin asked, Hunt scanned the room and sure enough, there were several dozen crewmen fighting the blaze around them, he tapped his comm. panel, but soon discovered that is was not functioning. In vain he looked around the cockpit for anything he could use to warn them, his eyes set back on the phaser control panel, which indicated that one beam emitter was still barely operational. He aimed it out the shuttle bay doors and then reached down to his control stick and began to squeeze the trigger in intermittent bursts.
Lieutenant Commander Taurik and Major Dergos had just stepped in with fire extinguishers to assist the deck crew; Taurik began spraying foam at the fire toward the bow, with the aim of reaching the cockpit. Dergos was at his side doing the same thing. When suddenly, a red orange beam shot past them and struck the force field over the still open space doors. Taurik stood, puzzled for a moment then another beam flew by, followed by a slightly shorter one, more beams of varying lengths followed, than in typical Vulcan manner, Taurik realized that the beams formed the pattern. He relayed this information to Dergos.
“I remember,” Dergos said, “Hunt once telling me about an old Earth code that made patterns like this,” during a pause, he began translating, “Golf-Echo-Tango, Get…” he paused as another set of beams began to fire, “Oscar-Uniform-Tango?”
“Out,” Taurik suggested.
“I know how to spell ‘Out,’ you God damn Vulcan,” Dergos spat, “What do they mean, ‘get out’?” Then it hit him, “Everybody clear the room!” he shouted. Most of the deck hands didn’t notice, he whipped out a hand phaser and fired it at the ceiling to get their attention, “Everybody, Listen,” He bellowed, “get the furk out of here now!” Everyone ran for the nearest exit.
“Come on guys,” Hunt said, waiting for his sensors to show the room clear, then the sensors showed an energy discharge, and a moment later, the life signs began to leave, “That’s Renbe alright!”
“Let’s get ready to blow this thing.”
continued in next post
Star Trek New Order
Episode 009
“Fire and Ice”
Captain’s Log; Star Date 57049.5; we left space dock several hours ago and before rejoining the fleet, I have decided to put the ship through a quick shake down. Our CAG has asked me to come down to the main shuttlebay to see something she picked up at Star Base 11.
Captain Hunt walked into the hanger deck and saw a short blond woman in a green jumpsuit briskly polishing the wing root of a large gray fighter. Hunt snuck up behind her. “I thought we left the Idiot at the Star Base for one of Brin’s goons to pick up?”
She turned around, startled, “I did; impound bay, as you instructed,” Chavin answered, “This is what I wanted to show you.”
“It looks like a Peregrine Fighter,” Hunt answered, “just like the dozen others onboard.”
“Wrong,” Chavin replied, “this is a Peregrine III.”
“What’s the difference?”
“Peregrine Is, like T’kir’s boat, were originally built as Couriers and EW craft, meant to be escorted by the armed Sparrow IIs.” Chavin explained, “a few were bought by the Maquis and modified with phasers; that became the basis for the Mark II, which Starfleet also gave a smaller, one man, cockpit and larger magazine. Now this baby is a Mark III, brand new and designed as a fighter bomber from the start. I volunteered to test her out for a friend in Fighter Command.”
“Ok,” Hunt nodded, “Why didn’t you talk to me about it?”
“I wanted to surprise you,” she answered as she produced a pair of pressure suits from the open cockpit.”
“Well,” Hunt responded, “I am thoroughly surprised.”
“I wanted to take you out for the first test flight.”
* * *
Within minutes, Hunt was seated in the back seat of the tandem cockpit putting his helmet on. Chavin keyed her helmet’s communicator, “The air boss has cleared us for taxi,” she said to Hunt as the GravLifts kicked in and lifted the fighter’s landing struts a nanometer off the deck so that Chavin could taxi the wheel-less fighter to the shuttlecraft elevator. Then they rode the elevator to the main shuttlebay, two decks above. Once they entered the main shuttlebay, Chavin deftly brought the craft to one of the four massive gravity catapults built into the deck plating, and disengaged the GravLifts. A yellow shirted Deck Hand exchanged hand signals with Chavin through the canopy as Hunt felt the gravity catapult lift the fighter back up several centimeters as Chavin raised the landing struts into their flight positions.
“Asgard, this is Thor One-Zero-Zero,” Chavin addressed the Traffic Controller, “requesting takeoff clearance shuttle bay one, cat two.”
“You came up with those call signs, didn’t you?” Hunt asked, knowing her affinity for a certain Science Fiction program.
“No,” She answered, “Hello: Beliskner, ‘Thor’s Chariot,’ from ‘Asgard,’ the home of the Norse gods, they kind of came with it.” Hunt nodded.
Then the Controller returned, “Asgard to Thor One-Zero-Zero, you are cleared to launch on cat two, Supreme Commander.” Hunt chuckled.
“Ok that one I did come up with,” Chavin relented, after an awkward silence, “Come on, Supreme Commander Thor.” As the gravity catapult powered up, the two of them ran through a last minute checklist.
Hunt looked down at his stick and throttle assembly and asked. “Why does this thing have a stick?”
“Have you ever tried to do combat maneuvers in one of these things from the LCARS terminal?” She shot back, “I made sure that they put that in so it is easier to control.” Then they began to feel weightless as the gravity catapult came to full power. The catapult was designed to assist the heavy fighter in safely launching from the relatively short shuttle bay. Chavin then gave the yellow shirted crewman a thumb up gesture with her hand, and he retreated to the catapult control panel. She then saluted him and he activated the Catapult.
Hunt abruptly felt eight Gs of force pressing him into his seat as the fighter accelerated forwards. Then all of a sudden, the gravity tractor reversed polarity and the fighter slammed into the deck; then the craft shot backwards with eight times the force of normal earth gravity. As it slammed into the back wall of the shuttlebay, the main deuterium tank ruptured and began spilling the heavy hydrogen slush onto the deck. Then the still running Impulse engines’ hot exhaust ignited the volatile fuel and started a massive conflagration around the stricken craft.
Fire Crews were already responding when Hunt came out of his G induced black out. He reached forward and shook Chavin awake. Around them, Hunt could only see a wall of bright blue fire. Acknowledging that the two of them were in a vessel potentially filled with explosives and other highly unstable items, Hunt and Chavin began to safe everything.
“I’m scramming the Warp Core,” Chavin announced, pressing a control on her panel, “We had better do something about the ordinance.” Praying that the nose was still pointed towards the open shuttle bay doors, and that no one was in the way, Hunt rapid fired all four of the loaded micro torpedoes out of the forward torpedo banks, and into space behind the ship.
“What should I do about the antimatter,” Hunt asked.
“Hope that the magnetic containment holds,” Chavin shrugged, “the hatch is on the belly.”
“Let’s get the hell out of here!” Chavin said as she pressed the canopy release; nothing happened. She tried again, but still nothing.
“I wouldn’t want to step out into that anyway,” Hunt deadpanned, pointing outside at the still growing inferno.
“Frak!” Chavin exclaimed, pounding her fist on the canopy, “the emergency transporters won’t work either.”
“Come to think of it,” Hunt thought aloud, “why hasn’t Beliskner beamed us out yet?”
“Frak this,” Chavin shouted again, as she reached for the Ejection handle on her seat.
“Wait,” Hunt yelled, “if you try that in here, we will go splat against the roof!” Then Hunt had an idea, he quickly scanned the ceiling, looking for the explosive bolts that held the emergency hatches onto the ship. He explained his plan to Chavin.
“What about the crew in here?” Chavin asked, Hunt scanned the room and sure enough, there were several dozen crewmen fighting the blaze around them, he tapped his comm. panel, but soon discovered that is was not functioning. In vain he looked around the cockpit for anything he could use to warn them, his eyes set back on the phaser control panel, which indicated that one beam emitter was still barely operational. He aimed it out the shuttle bay doors and then reached down to his control stick and began to squeeze the trigger in intermittent bursts.
Lieutenant Commander Taurik and Major Dergos had just stepped in with fire extinguishers to assist the deck crew; Taurik began spraying foam at the fire toward the bow, with the aim of reaching the cockpit. Dergos was at his side doing the same thing. When suddenly, a red orange beam shot past them and struck the force field over the still open space doors. Taurik stood, puzzled for a moment then another beam flew by, followed by a slightly shorter one, more beams of varying lengths followed, than in typical Vulcan manner, Taurik realized that the beams formed the pattern. He relayed this information to Dergos.
“I remember,” Dergos said, “Hunt once telling me about an old Earth code that made patterns like this,” during a pause, he began translating, “Golf-Echo-Tango, Get…” he paused as another set of beams began to fire, “Oscar-Uniform-Tango?”
“Out,” Taurik suggested.
“I know how to spell ‘Out,’ you God damn Vulcan,” Dergos spat, “What do they mean, ‘get out’?” Then it hit him, “Everybody clear the room!” he shouted. Most of the deck hands didn’t notice, he whipped out a hand phaser and fired it at the ceiling to get their attention, “Everybody, Listen,” He bellowed, “get the furk out of here now!” Everyone ran for the nearest exit.
“Come on guys,” Hunt said, waiting for his sensors to show the room clear, then the sensors showed an energy discharge, and a moment later, the life signs began to leave, “That’s Renbe alright!”
“Let’s get ready to blow this thing.”
continued in next post